Bago niyo ito basahin, eto muna ang basahin niyo. I don't do sequels much sa mga fictions ko, pero I liked the story, meron pala akong madudugtong.
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“Laurie, I’m married…” he whispered.
I like Franco. I know matagal na siyang may crush sa akin. It makes me laugh everytime nauutal siya when he’s talking to me.
Should I do this? It’s wrong. I’m a married woman. I love my husband. Pero there’s something about Franco. There’s something different. Gusto kong subukan.
“Trade secret?” I came over to Franco and said, “Me too.”
Bumalik ako sa upuan ko and watched him. Nakasmile siya.
“So how do we do this?” he asked. Nanginginig na siya. He’s more nervous. He likes the reaction, but I don’t think yun yung gusto niya na mangyari.
“I don’t know Franco. I’ve never done this before.”
I’ve never done this before. What if mahuli kami? Ang bait ng asawa ko, I know he’ll never cheat on me.
Pero bakit hindi ko maalis sa isip ko si Franco. I want to know how his touch feels. Kung paano siya humalik. I want to know if he’s good in bed. Gusto ko maramdaman yung braso niya nakayakap sa akin. I want to feel him inside me. I want him.
“I love my wife,” he started. “I’m not going to cheat on her. We’re not going to cheat on her.”
Suddenly, he’s delusional. Hindi ko siya maintindihan. What we’re doing, even the thought of it, the fact that we’re here, we’re already cheating. This is not right. But I can’t take the thoughts. Gusto ko siyang makasama. I'm nervous, and excited. I've never been bad. I don't want to be, but I think this feels good. I know it's wrong, but I feel it's right.
"How are we not cheating Franco?" tanong ko sa kanya.
Nakasmile siya ulit. God, nakakatunaw ang ngiti niya. I can't say no. Not to him. Not now. My life's going to be complicated.
"Trust me," that's all he says.
Kinuha niya ang kamay ko, and he guided me outside of the restaurant. Sinakay niya ako sa car niya. He is a gentleman.
"Saan tayo pupunta?" I asked.
"Just trust me," he said smiling. Ang naughty na ng smile niya. The type when you know meron kayong gagawing hindi maganda. "It's going to be fun."
He brought me home. His home. Kinabahan ako. I mean, I'm okay to do it, I've accepted the risk, pero this might bee too much.
"Are you sure this is a good idea?" I asked him. Nararamdaman ko yung heartbeat kong lumalakas with every word I'm saying.
"Shhhhhh." he hushed while winking.
Dinala niya ako sa room nilang mag-asawa. He asked me to wait for him outside. Every second na andun ako, iba ang kabog ng dibdib ko. Like it wants to get out of my body. Then the door opened.
"Come in," he invited.
Pumasok ako and was shocked with what I saw.
A girl in her black nighties laying on Franco's bed. Katabi niya si Franco.
"You must be Laurie. I'm Shei, Franco's wife. I understand you're gonna be joining us tonight?"
"Oh," yan lang ang nasabi ko.
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Next post... my kilig weekend. :)
jaw dropper. hahaha.
ReplyDeleteOh-ow!!! Ayus na fiction, wala bang pinagkuhanan sa totoong buhay to par? hehe
ReplyDeleteWhew! That was intense lol! Open ending...
ReplyDeletemore!!! haha, nabitin ako, but it's nice! the thoughts of each character are presented well in both parts. on your next sequel (kung meron pa, malamang meron) pls give us a look in the mind of Franco's wife. XD
ReplyDeletepang precious hearts romances sa tv. XD
Okay i didn't see that coming. That was intense! Parang xerex lang. Bitin LOL
ReplyDeleteoh shayt!
ReplyDeletecurve ball nga. fun fun. :-p
ReplyDelete'oh' lang din ang nasabi ko. may kasamang M & G pa, as in OhMG. hahaha :)
ReplyDeleteokay - kala ko foursome ang ending nito eh :)
ReplyDeleteooh what the f*..... whahaha LOL yung ending ha,,, kakatuwa,,, nice fiction :D bravo :D
ReplyDeletewhoaaaa!!! bitinnnnnnnn!!!
ReplyDeletenice gillboard! i thought wala nang kasunod ang fiction story na to...
part 3 na!!
galing! galing! iba ka talaga!
yak, sounds like threesome to me. kung ako yan sasampalin ko agadsi franco..
ReplyDelete(affected) haha
naks hanggaling gumawa nang kuwento ni kuya Gilbert... may talent!... nd yeah naks threesome.. maybe ung next one eh trade partner silah... she'll bring her husband nemen... lolz... ingat po.. Godbless! -di
ReplyDeleteteka, teka sir, anong gagawin nilang tatlo? waah. Threesome? Hahaha. Kakabitin ka. Tuloy mo na, sir! :]
ReplyDeletenagulat ako dun ah!!! threesome..exciting hahaha
ReplyDeleteInteresante y gracioso.
ReplyDeleteSolamente quiero expresar la admiración a su blog:
Interesante...diseño fantastico en resumen muy bueno
Yo soy novato en esto pero poco a poco intentaremos mejorar
gracias
yes!
ReplyDeletenyahaha